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New Website - Feedback please

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adamcoupe
London, United Kingdom
Posted December 16, 2008 20:40 Report | Quote
Hi


Your feedback on first impressions, usability, navigation and of course images would be appreciated on my new website

Thanks

http://www.adamcoupe.com
ssjothun
Stavanger, Norway
Posted December 17, 2008 14:29 Report | Quote

First impression is nice and clean - I like the front page image with the logo inside, but I had to start reading the actual copy before I knew what you were doing - perhaps a slogan or a tagline along would help that?

I get the impression that you're one photographer, not a large company, so why not emphasize on just that - it could be a major sales point: personal and exclusive service, they get to work with you directly etc.

Try to losen up the "corporate" speak on your site and make every work count. Things like "Customer feedback suggests that viewing a number of images from each shoot provides an insight into how projects and installations are interpreted." is definitely important information for you, but really isn't that relevant to me as a visitor.

Try to speak directly to the customer instead of about your other customers and about your company.

I also noticed on your Contact page that you have a "Where you heard about me?" We do have the same thing here at Crestock, but the difference is your defaults to Google - many are lazy or simply doesn't notice - 50% of the sigups we get do not list where they came from, so whatever numbers you get from that form, perhaps 50% could be errorous?

And since you list your phone # on your front page, why not lit it on the Contact page as well?

Hope this helps!

Sverre Sjøthun

Jill74
United States
Posted June 25, 2009 06:09 Report | Quote

awesome site! It's nice.

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